tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8311060361308252769.post3115533814620153886..comments2024-03-01T03:36:45.772-05:00Comments on THE WHEEL OF SAMSARA: First Draft Take Two!Matthew Slepinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04056247825064943944noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8311060361308252769.post-68793331211445074252009-10-29T00:18:49.243-04:002009-10-29T00:18:49.243-04:00Looking good! But a few more errors:
In the tabl...Looking good! But a few more errors: <br /><br />In the table of contents and right after the heading "Species" the mul-analogues are called "Esne" but in their description section (after the Desert Men) they are called "Helots"<br /><br />P26 under the "Arms" and "Materials" heading you have a sentence "This the most common materials..." I assume "This" should be "Thus".<br /><br />There may be more, but that's where I quit being picky.Daniel "Theophage" Clarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06549820632347676051noreply@blogger.com